Part 11

28 Nov 2013 08:30 pm

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Petty, 28 Nov 2013 08:30 pm     Reply

PART 11!

OK

SO I FINALLY GOT THIS DONE

I had a lot of computer problems on top of just moving to Brooklyn! (Yayyyyy I'm a city-dweller now!) I'm sorry It's kinda short, but there's some plot stuff... and the next update I'm REALLY excited for because DELICIOUS PLOT will happen also lots of action panels (like 90% of the comic is action sequences)

Gosh, I wonder who Morty could be talking to? :B

Fun fact: this version of Jasmine originally went to school to become a pokemon doctor but ended up finding her passion and following her father's footsteps in becoming a gym leader. Her talents are of great use though, as she is the primary caretaker of the lighthouse pokemon. :>

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Master_72, 28 Nov 2013 08:37 pm     Reply


I love jasmine's personality in this. Definetly more ill, stressed and frightened than just shy and worried. Good job! ^_^

Umioko, 28 Nov 2013 08:44 pm     Reply


Great update! I love reading this comic!

And ohoho, I also wonder who Morty could be talking to. c:

Reeves (Guest), 28 Nov 2013 08:50 pm     Reply

Legendaries
I noticed how the kimono girl's dresses are based off of Arceus and the legendary dogs. That was a nice touch, good job.

Tijopi11, 28 Nov 2013 09:05 pm     Reply


@Reeves: woah, i had no idea. How did i not notice this until you pointed it out? xD

and, THANKYOU FOR UPDATING ON THANKSGIVING. Such an awesome present!

Master_72, 28 Nov 2013 09:10 pm     Reply


@Tijopi11: 'Scuse me, but Thanksgiving's in OCTOBER, mate.

godmoderncommander, 28 Nov 2013 09:56 pm     Reply


@Master_72: In the US, it's November. Apparently Canada cerebrates it early.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Thanksgiving

Anyway, Yay!! An update!! It has been far too long.

GamerKane (Guest), 28 Nov 2013 10:28 pm     Reply


Awesome update! Glad to see that Locke held on to all her stuff.

thegreatawsum1, 28 Nov 2013 10:43 pm     Reply

Dr. Jasmine, in the house...
Yay!! New page!!
I like your take on the kimono girls and the fact that you didn't actually show the legendary beasts wake up. Very cool!

katie310117 (Guest), 28 Nov 2013 11:14 pm     Reply


My first thought as to who he was talking to was Eusine?

Luigi_96, 28 Nov 2013 11:40 pm     Reply


Woohoo! HM03. Surf?

Chinchilla (Guest), 29 Nov 2013 12:56 am     Reply

you rock!
"Arceus guide you all."

that should be in the game. :)
And as always best comic on the internet.

Lady Darkrina, 29 Nov 2013 03:25 am     Reply


Really loving the expressions and how Jasmine seems a lot more worried for Amphy than she does in game.

Great stuff as usual, really loved the style on the first 2 panels^^

Cappy, 29 Nov 2013 03:40 am     Reply


@katie310117: I thought that too, hahaha!!

Good work Petty! I can't wait for the next page!

Psychotheclown, 29 Nov 2013 08:57 am     Reply


YES

YOU DON'T KNOW HOW RARE IT IS FOR ONE OF MY TWO FAVORITE NUZLOCKE COMICS TO UPDATE oh wait you probably do actually :P

Syogren, 29 Nov 2013 12:09 pm     Reply


Well, I can safely say that this was worth the wait.

BandaintBandaid, 29 Nov 2013 01:53 pm     Reply


i'm sorry but did anyone else notice that jane was the deer

jane doe

SirBisharp (Guest), 29 Nov 2013 02:07 pm     Reply


Alright, great job, now to wait for next year's update!

boh... (Guest), 29 Nov 2013 02:37 pm     Reply


no really guys, I don't understand who morty was talking with. please tell me that it's not eusine.

@SirBisharp:
LOL

Guest, 29 Nov 2013 04:00 pm     Reply


I like how you made the kimono girls dress like the Suicune, Entei, Raikou, and Arceus!

Mango Dolphin, 29 Nov 2013 04:24 pm     Reply


@Syogren: Truly worth it indeed.

Although a little rushed to me (in the text, I mean, the art is amazing), I can understand. TOTALLY WORTH THE WAIT

HazelFox (Guest), 29 Nov 2013 09:01 pm     Reply


Wow, um, this is embarissing. I never really played the games so I actually dont know who Morty was talking about. so uhh... I genuinly wonder who Morty was talking about

Euclid (Guest), 30 Nov 2013 01:28 pm     Reply

:D
Always worth the wait, Petty ;)
Nice work. Looking forward to that action sequence.

Charlotte057, 30 Nov 2013 04:19 pm     Reply


YAY
I WAS WONDERING IF YOU'D EVER COME BACK :C

Scorpio750, 01 Dec 2013 06:45 am     Reply


I'm sad that you skipped over the Burned Tower and Morty and the Lighthouse Tower. I hope just because you're busy that you don't gloss over events in the game :c I love seeing the way you describe them Petty!
and lol @ Mortyyy hahahhaa that's too funny!

TheKometh, 01 Dec 2013 10:29 am     Reply


MortyXEusine?
Thanks, but no thanks.

Master_72, 01 Dec 2013 01:48 pm     Reply


Guys guys GUYS! Isn't it obvious he's talking to his mom!? Seriously...

Nightblade370 (Guest), 02 Dec 2013 01:36 am     Reply


Hehehe...I know whats going on here. Morty you sly dog, I know you're in love with Eusine. You can hide it all you want, but we know.

Jasmine was also really well done here; it feels like there's more to this retrieval mission than what meets the eye with the missing trainers. I can't wait to see what you have in mind.

And I'm fine with waiting for the next comic so long as the quality is top notch, but what do I have to worry about if its coming from one of the best comics to date. Best of luck in New York; it's truly an incredible city.

Miles Hikari, 02 Dec 2013 10:40 am     Reply


I can only imagine....

Mango Dolphin, 02 Dec 2013 09:57 pm     Reply


@BandaintBandaid: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH YOU CAUGHT IT OH MY GOSH I DIDN'T KNOW

Seriously, who was Morty talking to? And I hope Amphy will get better...

My bro's Ampharos Bolt likes her, by the way, so I hope she'll be okay.

Now about New York, good luck, and I hope you have the, well, hope and faith you need to continue. Best wishes!

Benji (Guest), 03 Dec 2013 11:27 pm     Reply


Thank u soooooo much 4 finally coming back always looking forward to the next update

Icalasari (Guest), 04 Dec 2013 01:58 am     Reply


YAY YOU'RE ALIVE!

AriasBlue (Guest), 04 Dec 2013 11:32 am     Reply

LeafGreen
Did Locke keep all her stuff from her last adventure in Kanto?

IceColdGlaceon, 04 Dec 2013 04:27 pm     Reply


is it me or does morty have an IPhone XD

Professor Celery (Guest), 05 Dec 2013 12:45 pm     Reply


@AriasBlue: Probably not, she likely lost or ruined it during the Mewtwo incident.

Ginger (Guest), 05 Dec 2013 09:36 pm     Reply

*insert double take here*
Now that she has a geodude/golem and a koffing, the only pokemon Locke can catch in the Mahogany TR hideout are Voltorb and Electrode, so could the music, that died a long long time ago, come back to life?!

AeroQC (Guest), 08 Dec 2013 05:49 am     Reply


I wonder though, will Locke be travelling through every region?
If so Hoenn would be next, right?
Or will you be skipping that and going to straight to Sinnoh due to it being in the same generation as HGSS?

Zach (Guest), 08 Dec 2013 08:55 pm     Reply

I'm excited.
I REAAALY want to find out who Morty was talking to, and for the adventure to continue. But, the "adventure" likely hasn't been written yet. And in HeartGold, the journey is a bit more challenging than the original from what i've heard.

Mango Dolphin, 09 Dec 2013 08:07 pm     Reply


@Ginger: Never gonna give you up, never gonna let you down~
Never gonna run around; and desert you.
Never gonna make you cry, never gonna say goodbye~!
Never gonna tell a lie~ and hurt you!

(maybe)

katie310117 (Guest), 09 Dec 2013 08:50 pm     Reply


@Master_72

Could be his mother, considering that he seems all embarrassed about saying I love you, but assuming that Morty is talking about Suicune, who is the person who most cares about Suicune? Eusine. Unless Petty is making some other character Morty's mom, or else making up an oc, it just seems the simplest explanation.

Ginger (Guest), 10 Dec 2013 12:33 pm     Reply


@Mango Dolphin: It could be possible, because, if Broseph managed to survive blowing himself up, maybe Rick survived the Future Sight attack! Maybe, instead of killing him it merely sent him through time to the future!

Mango Dolphin, 11 Dec 2013 05:07 pm     Reply


@Ginger: Maybe it works in a similar way of Brospeh. The Future Sight prediction seems a bit farfetch'd (although awesome), but maybe when killed the Voltorb line converts itself into special electricity that travels in the air or in power lines and in a certain place the electricity is released, creating a new Voltorb, starting the cycle again. *grins a ridiculous smile*

Darkstorm (Guest), 12 Dec 2013 01:12 am     Reply


Morty and Eusine <3 How cute! I love your design for the kimono girls. And your take on Jasmine. And everything in your comic!

Minty (Guest), 12 Dec 2013 07:36 pm     Reply


Morty + Eusine =

yessssssssss

I've shipped that since Crystal

AriasBlue (Guest), 12 Dec 2013 10:47 pm     Reply

Riight
@Professor Celery: True, true. Man, I feel bad for Locke's team, they bought her a nice, awesome bag just for rotten Mewtwo to ruin it... Goddamn!

Professor Celery (Guest), 15 Dec 2013 02:00 pm     Reply


Colonel is an excellent name for a Sunkern.

Ginger (Guest), 16 Dec 2013 04:39 pm     Reply

Also...
@Mango Dolphin: You're not alone, together we stand
I'll be by your side you know I'll take you hand
When it gets cold and it feels like the end, there's no place to go you know I won't give in

MaveriKat (Guest), 21 Dec 2013 12:16 pm     Reply

Kimono Dancers
I really love how you've been designing their outfits after Legendary PokéMon. It's really stand out.

And why do I have a feeling the awakening of Johto's Legendary Trio has to do with... LOCKE TUPELO!?

Dun, DUN, DUNNNNNNN!!!

thatoneguy (Guest), 21 Dec 2013 01:54 pm     Reply


ok soooo its nearly chritsmas and there are no more comics are out :(

Ugjvngj (Guest), 21 Dec 2013 05:17 pm     Reply


Updates updates how I love teh updates

Ghvjgjg (Guest), 21 Dec 2013 05:19 pm     Reply


@thatoneguy: well it's nearly Christmas so there wouldn't be updates or,wait she did a Christmas special in leaf green........ Update pleeeeaase

Fbrbgfbh (Guest), 21 Dec 2013 05:21 pm     Reply


You know what I just realized when a pokemon description says "hates to lose" in a nuzlocke
Yeah I hope you don't like losing

Dbjduxjcb (Guest), 21 Dec 2013 05:22 pm     Reply


I like what u did with Jasmine

Os (Guest), 21 Dec 2013 08:37 pm     Reply

I'm calling it!
Eusine is going to be Morty's father.

Professor Celery (Guest), 22 Dec 2013 12:21 pm     Reply


@Fbrbgfbh: And then there's Pokemon like Dratini, Magikarp, etc. who 'like to run.'
@MaveriKat: Yeah, every comic I've read so far has a Pokemon-based outfit for each Kimono Girl, be it their respective Eeveelution, the Legendary Dogs, or Lugia/Ho-Oh.

Rick Can't Come Back (Guest), 22 Dec 2013 07:55 pm     Reply

Rick Can't Come Back
I was a bit bummed when broseph came back... and I would be bummed if Rick came back as well. Truly I loved those characters... but bringing Broseph back ruined his death for me... it made the emotional pain of his death a little more... i dont know... cheap? The whole point of nuzlo0ckes is cahracter death and bringing them back like that is the opposite of what should happen. At least in my opinion. That being said I like the Future Sight theory. Rick's death was the only in all the nuzlockes I have read to make me tear up and brining him back would both make me excited and dissapointed.

thatoneguy (Guest), 24 Dec 2013 03:46 am     Reply


@Ghvjgjg: who has the last laugh now?

Professor Celery (Guest), 24 Dec 2013 08:27 pm     Reply


@thatoneguy: It's not Christmas for some people yet.

Weebl (Guest), 25 Dec 2013 04:59 pm     Reply


Meh. This comic used to be entertaining, now it's just a lot mediocre plot lines pretending to be a decent one. LeafGreen was a great comic, but this one is far too pretentious.

Icalasari (Guest), 30 Dec 2013 06:39 am     Reply


@Rick Can't Come Back: Broseph had an excuse. He exploded, and a rocky species doing that much have SOME way of surviving

Rick however got killed by someone else's attack and, as such, I would just be as disappointed as you if Rick was brought back

NinjaAlpaca, 31 Dec 2013 12:45 am     Reply


@Weebl: You do better then, I think this is a brilliant story and I'm sure a fair few think so also.

The replier (Guest), 07 Jan 2014 01:04 pm     Reply


@Weebl: You just don't like the idea of altering stories any. Many people, including me, still believe that this is a great comic.

Ghost (Guest), 07 Jan 2014 03:04 pm     Reply


I check this website ONE day before its updated... *sigh* Anyway, good job Petty to have made this comic before Christmas (even though I didn't check it until now) and great job on making everyone in the game multi-dimensional characters. It's one thing Game Freak is messing up on.

The Sad Unown (Guest), 09 Jan 2014 10:14 am     Reply

What happened?
This comic last updated on Nov. 28 2013. It is now Jan. 9 2014. What happened to this awesome comic? Is the artist on hiatus or something?

Mango Dolphin, 10 Jan 2014 07:37 pm     Reply


@Icalasari: If the Future Sight theory is right... it's more likely that Rick was sent further in the future from this or possibly into the past. It'd actually be kinda disappointing, now that I think about it.

Anonymous (Guest), 13 Jan 2014 03:20 pm     Reply


@The Sad Unown: this has unfortunately become a routine, the many months between updates. It is still, as you said, an awesome comic. In spite of the number of trolls and complainers that tend to accumulate between updates. Good news is, it's a routine, so there is still assurance that updates will come!

MawileCeyvis (Guest), 14 Jan 2014 11:41 am     Reply

Wow
I was just browsing through rarecandytreatment, and Bumbazzle had a link here. Love your work, and so does everyone at said site! Hope you do a White2/Black2 one when you're finished with this one. Nice job bringing back Broseph, he was my fav besides Rick in LG.

MawileCeyvis (Guest), 14 Jan 2014 08:04 pm     Reply

uh...
@katie310117: umm...I'm prrrretttty sure he is. It would be an interesting plot twist to have a homo relationship after all. I mean, look at Nick di Angelo in percy jackson. NOBODY saw that coming. We all thought it was gonna be annabeth.

Guest, 17 Jan 2014 05:11 pm     Reply


@MawileCeyvis: Jack ass how about spoiler alert next time!? I only just finished that scene and you could've ruined it you jerk. It's too recent to just be thrown around like Dumbledore getting killed

MawileCeyvis (Guest), 17 Jan 2014 10:53 pm     Reply


@Guest: hahaha I see what yu did there. Very lolz. Now shut up.

frogs (Guest), 23 Jan 2014 05:01 pm     Reply

argh
Plz just update the comic already. I need your awesomness

Guest, 23 Jan 2014 05:31 pm     Reply


The frequency at which this is updated is utterly ridiculous, and before anyone says comics usually take this long to make, save your breath. I've seen other drawn comics on SJ and those have been uploaded 4 times as much in about 3 weeks than this one has in about 2 to 3 months, and not only that but those other comics were vastly more detailed and intricate while this is just doodles with a lackluster coloring job.

Joe (Guest), 23 Jan 2014 05:34 pm     Reply


@Guest: ugh, thank you. I've actually taken a hiatus from SJ for about 3 months, and when I come back this webcomic still shows no signs of life. Screw. You. Petty.

Guest, 26 Jan 2014 10:35 pm     Reply


Petty isn't obligated to update, you're reading this for free. And don't compare this to other comics, artists are human beings who have different lives and ways of doing things

Zach (Guest), 28 Jan 2014 03:34 pm     Reply

DEF TIME FOR AN UPDATE
Okay, Petty. You had December 2013 and 28 days of 2014. We need the conclusion. I looks like the Mojave here. Empty and boring.

Guest, 29 Jan 2014 12:42 am     Reply


Sheesh all the whining over not getting something for free. Petty does have to work you know. Just because other people update more doesn't mean she can, even if she does want to.

Guest, 30 Jan 2014 05:09 pm     Reply


@Guest: You're absolutely right. Humans are different. For example, some are lazier than others.

GuestGuestGuestGuest (Guest), 09 Feb 2014 03:39 pm     Reply

Can't wait
Can't wait for the next.

MawileCeyvis (Guest), 11 Feb 2014 09:25 pm     Reply


@Guest: Hello, welcome to the Internet. You must be new here.

MawileCeyvis (Guest), 13 Feb 2014 11:58 am     Reply

You idiots.
You know what? I'm sick and tired of you people who are complaining about Petty not updating. Well, she doesn't have to! But she does it anyway out of the goodness in her heart! She has a job, and making this comic is hard work for her! So why don't you haters just shut up and wait patiently for an update like the rest of us! And Petty, take your time. I for one know it's hard for you.

NinjaAlpaca, 14 Feb 2014 04:19 pm     Reply


*sigh*...and to think the comment section used to be a place where we could share our own free ideas, but no...this place is an all out open war with impatient people on one side and on the other side...people who think they can tell the other people to shut up and go away and put a few screw you's in the blender, do you really think you have the right to accuse and curse at these people? What have you people done? And to think the comments used to be full of happy people brimming with different ideas on this comic and other related things, but it seems I'm wrong, all you do is shut other peoples ideas out the window and when one doesn't agree, people are drawn in like flies to a zapper. Like they say, if you don't have anything nice to say, don't say anything at all.
Thank you.
Good luck petty.

Anonymous (Guest), 17 Feb 2014 05:26 pm     Reply


@NinjaAlpaca: ok I'll bite on conversation about the comic. What will Percy's personality be like as an Umbreon? Who will Locke use against Chuck? I vote Weston and maybe that Parasect for the second part.

Dndchk (Guest), 19 Feb 2014 06:40 pm     Reply

Eusine!
@Petty: Wow! I realized I haven't checked up on this for a while and remembered how much I love it! ;) Morty has to be talking to Eusine. (Also a storylocke I follow titled 'Blood and Bond' has Morty paired with Eusine. I ship it so hard. *shameless*)

I'm really glad to know you're still working on this! Hopefully you'll be able to update soon!

Guest, 20 Feb 2014 05:56 pm     Reply


I don't even care about this comic anymore. There's so much needless focus on the story that it doesn't even feel like a Nuzlocke anymore. Fuck, this part right here doesn't even have a legit battle in it, she fucking skipped over the gym battle with Morty! I know she's "trying" to make a nuzlocke comic more interesting, but this is a nuzlocke comic first and foremost, so if you're not even going to keep the focus on your nuzlocke run then don't call this garbage a nuzlocke comic anymore.

Dndchk (Guest), 22 Feb 2014 05:14 pm     Reply

Oh hey look a troll!
@ Guest: Say whatever you want. I, personally, love the story aspects of Petty's comic- they're what make her world come to life for me. If you don't like it, that's fine, too. Good bye.

Cran (Guest), 24 Feb 2014 04:58 pm     Reply


@Dndchk: Based on how you're attempting to shove your opinion down his throat, I'd be lying to myself if I didn't say you were a troll too. Now pipe down and love the comic in silence, you're embarrassing yourself.

Foren Magra (Guest), 25 Feb 2014 05:09 pm     Reply

Keep Going
If you guys really want her to stop making them because they're SO terrible, stop commenting. It shows your reading. You guys are all just upset because she hasn't updated in a while. I would like to see an update, but I'll just keep waiting. I'm sure she has a life. I love this comic, great story, and never cusses. Keep going!

Dndchk (Guest), 26 Feb 2014 05:56 pm     Reply

Oy vey
@Cran: I wasn't forcing my opinions down his throat. I told him why I liked the comic and basically said that if he doesn't like Petty's work, he's entitled to his opinion but doesn't need to be so hateful.

Thank you for calling me a troll, by the way. I really appreciate it. *sarcasm*

NinjaAlpaca, 27 Feb 2014 04:22 am     Reply


@Dndchk: Sarcasm doesn't really work on the inter webs :P

VVR (Guest), 27 Feb 2014 12:20 pm     Reply

Just a Question
Hey, guys, not trying to stir up another shitstorm, but I gotta ask; is this comic dead?
I haven't seen any Petty activity anywhere in a while. Anyone know if she's still working on this?

NinjaAlpaca, 28 Feb 2014 12:07 am     Reply


@VVR: it may seem dead but don't worry. Petty said that even if she doesn't update in a year she will still be thinking about this comic and she will never abandon it, we just all need the patience :)

Taunedtauros (Guest), 03 Mar 2014 06:34 pm     Reply

Updates
alll of my favorite comics are dead now. still reading everyweek

A NEW CHALLENGER (Guest), 03 Mar 2014 10:29 pm     Reply

Updates
The next update should be up soon. Petty said so on her tumbler.

eworm, 05 Aug 2014 08:18 am     Reply

ALERT
The page doesn't load. Might wish to re-upload this one.

This Guy (Guest), 19 Sep 2014 08:38 pm     Reply

A plea
Please re-upload this strip - I can't wait anymore! T_T
Btw - is everything okay? We haven't heard from you since forever :-(

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