Part 10b

August 15th, 2013, 2:39 am

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Petty, August 15th, 2013, 2:39 am     Reply

PART 10b

Alright. The dance hall. I loosely based it off a kabuki stage setup, incorporated painted screens and etc.

Kimono girl Miki was originally going to be more aloof (her in-game battle line says that she's the girl who prefers actions to words), but we haven't really gotten much dialogue from the girls yet, so this was a good opportunity to do so.

The evolutions: Ok, OBVIOUSLY they all didn't evolve here. Rule of cool, bro. The only ones that were evolved in-game prior to Morty were WESTON and BROSEPH. The rest got a pre-Chuck grind til they evolved. I did it to cut down on some panels in the next couple updates, since it won't be fitting the story to have LOCKE have to stop and grind her 'mons.

Also, foreshadowinggggggg?

The next update should start to sneak some plot in. ;)

Be on the lookout for it hopefully soon! My friend and I are going apartment hunting and I could be moving so everything's going to be a bit crazy these next few months. I already have it mostly thumbnailed though and it should be shorter than this update. :>

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pfenix, August 15th, 2013, 2:57 am     Reply

and every time, those kimono girls' designs amazes me :)

AnXjak, August 15th, 2013, 3:09 am     Reply

Eeeee, Parasect! ouo

King Pikablu (Guest), August 15th, 2013, 3:09 am     Reply

Wow, someone did some training

SUGauthor, August 15th, 2013, 3:18 am     Reply

I've never seen so many pokemon evolve at once.

eworm, August 15th, 2013, 4:01 am     Reply

Umbreon is the right choice. Used one in a Heart Gold Nuzlocke, best Pokémon of the team.

That's a lot of evolving at once and... Am I the only one who thinks that wasn't all that smart? I mean, granted, it is pretty epic and the scenario of fighting off a whole building of Rockets is a good reason to make it huge, but... Now what? We're only, what, 3/16 (badges) into the game and the team is already fully evolved. With one exception, but one needs National Dex to get a Shiny Stone for Togekiss.

That's just whining though. I'm sure Petty will find plenty of ways other than evolution to make things big.

Kurona, August 15th, 2013, 5:17 am     Reply

But... it's based on the game, where these Pokémon all do evolve pretty early...

Ginchiyo, August 15th, 2013, 5:23 am     Reply

Oh ho ho ho badass Golem Broseph.

eworm, August 15th, 2013, 5:23 am     Reply

@Kurona: Artistic liberties and such - it was entirely possible to make them evolve a bit later in the comic than they did in the actual play. Heck, there's no way they all evolved in the Ecruteak Theater, seeing as there's just one Grunt there in the game. But, again, it's not bad, it's just a little shame we won't see more evolutions for a very long time (not considering the option of new Pokémon joining the team because of sad reasons).

SUGauthor, August 15th, 2013, 5:25 am     Reply

@eworm: You are also assuming that this is her final team, even though there's a very good chance some of these Pokemon won't live to see Red.

Kurona, August 15th, 2013, 5:29 am     Reply

Considering she has a Parasect in her team, I highly suspect we will be seeing a new member soon.

Galarin, August 15th, 2013, 5:31 am     Reply

....that was EPIC! Now I remember why I love this comic so much.

eworm, August 15th, 2013, 5:40 am     Reply

@Kurona: Not necessarily. Used a Parasect in HG Nuzlocke once - survived all the way until my wipe-out right before the League. Heck, it's Spore allowed my Raticate to Swords Dance without worries and OHKO sweep Clair's whole team. Don't underestimate Parasect!

Kurona, August 15th, 2013, 5:42 am     Reply

... well then.

MEEP GOD, August 15th, 2013, 8:15 am     Reply

Hmmm... I see... I like the theme you have going with the kimono girls.

Never would of noticed it had this one not been so obvious though. (let alone notice the nice little touch you added to the first one)

IceColdGlaceon, August 15th, 2013, 9:39 am     Reply

LOL I laughed when she said" give her cover guys" then looks a the team rocket "oh sh--" XD

Luigi_96, August 15th, 2013, 10:09 am     Reply

Woot! This updated! xD

Miles Hikari, August 15th, 2013, 11:17 am     Reply

Broseph has finally reached the form he was made for.Rock those shutter shades my friend.

thegreatawsum1, August 15th, 2013, 1:42 pm     Reply

Sweeeet!! That was pretty epic!

Riskfan, August 15th, 2013, 3:40 pm     Reply


Rift (Guest), August 15th, 2013, 4:20 pm     Reply

Petty, you have shown immense dedication to your work, and it payed off. Everyone lives to their final evolutions! Umbreons are pretty versatile, from what I've heard, and my own Noctowl in my Platinum run is doing pretty well. Once again, totally worth the wait.

chinchilla (Guest), August 15th, 2013, 5:23 pm     Reply

never stop making this comic.

Dr.C (Guest), August 16th, 2013, 1:23 am     Reply

Update! This is fantastic. I had gotten reduced to looking up other pokemon comics and then when i checked my feed reader i see that you updated! Keep up the good work!

Pokemonfan1 (Guest), August 16th, 2013, 1:23 am     Reply

keep going please i love this comic to death

mapsal313, August 16th, 2013, 3:44 am     Reply

Wow, new pages! Looking great!

Montaru (Guest), August 16th, 2013, 11:13 am     Reply

Confirmed, at least four of her team survives Morty, with Weston and Broseph being the only ones with a chance to die.

Teej (Guest), August 16th, 2013, 3:52 pm     Reply

@eworm: You can actually get a shiny stone at the Pokeathlon and get Togekiss before the national dex, as it was added to the regional dex along with other Pokemon such as Tangrowth, Yanmega, etc.

eworm, August 16th, 2013, 4:03 pm     Reply

@Teej: Nope. There's no Shiny Stone at the PokéAthlon Dome until you get National Dex. Just Fire/Water/Leaf Stones.

Kenta (Guest), August 16th, 2013, 4:10 pm     Reply

I think this lady looks like an entei

Gh0st (Guest), August 16th, 2013, 4:28 pm     Reply

@Kenta: I agree...
That could be interesting...

whtbldX (Guest), August 17th, 2013, 1:45 am     Reply

i think that she IS entei cause how would she know lockes name

SUGauthor, August 17th, 2013, 4:55 am     Reply

@whtbldX: Why would being Entei allow her to know Locke's name?

Guest, August 17th, 2013, 4:33 pm     Reply

@Kenta and Gh0st: Have you noticed all the kimono girls so far are based on Johto legendaries? the one you meet in Violet City is Lugia and the one in Ilex Forrest is Celebi.

Kyogre (Guest), August 17th, 2013, 9:43 pm     Reply

Worth the wait as always!

FrostySphere (Guest), August 17th, 2013, 11:32 pm     Reply

I cant not think of the incredibles from that line

DaFire (Guest), August 18th, 2013, 2:37 pm     Reply

As amazing an artist as Petty is, that is one ugly-ass Umbreon.

Visitor (Guest), August 20th, 2013, 4:43 pm     Reply

These comics are flipping incredible. They introduced me to Nuzlocke comics in general. Forever grateful~

Good grief, it's like everyone chooses Umbreon for these games. Ever heard of Vaporeon, or maybe even Jolteon? Ooh, how about Espeon? No? Go home.

Can't wait for more of these colorful comics :D

BeretCat, August 21st, 2013, 2:47 pm     Reply

I saw this updated and I almost had a heart attack, this is one of the best Nuzlock comics I've ever seen!

Guest, August 22nd, 2013, 7:33 pm     Reply

@FrostySphere: I can't not think of that or the Crystal Empire episode from MLP.

Reeves (Guest), August 22nd, 2013, 9:14 pm     Reply

Wow, not even on the fifth gym yet and everyone's already at their final evolution. That is if you count Weston since he can't evolve again until after the E4.

Guest, August 23rd, 2013, 3:14 pm     Reply

I'm curious, how were you able to evolve broseph through trade? Is that allowed in a nuzlocke?? o_o

Guest, August 23rd, 2013, 4:47 pm     Reply

If Locke is a girl why don't she has any boobs??

Feralziken (Guest), August 23rd, 2013, 9:25 pm     Reply

im so excited for this comic. i was seriously worried it was abandoned. i REALLY hope Broseph and Athena make it to red

Mango Dolphin (Guest), August 24th, 2013, 5:18 pm     Reply

@Guest (one two or three above me) If the rules allow it.

@Guest (most recent that doesn't have a name) You're gross, man.

@Petty - Good luck on apartment hunting, gal!

Rift (Guest), August 26th, 2013, 6:45 am     Reply

Regarding Broseph: Petty stated that her rules allow it in an answer to a question in her Q&A blog.

Ginger (Guest), August 26th, 2013, 9:24 pm     Reply

@Petty: Two things: first, how are you going to explain the gym battle, since I doubt that it was done by no one but Broseph and Weston. Second, I disagree, it's not the Rule of Cool, it's the Law of Awesome.

SUGauthor, August 29th, 2013, 2:17 am     Reply

@Ginger: I could easily picture Weston wiping through the gym with extrasensory

Ginger (Guest), August 31st, 2013, 8:30 pm     Reply

@SUGauthor: I see what you mean, now I feel dumb...

SilverKey (Guest), September 6th, 2013, 1:35 pm     Reply

...I can't help but wonder what happened to Weston in-game. Togetic become dead weight after a while, due to a lack of offensive stats or same-type attacks, and their defense just doesn't hold up anymore around the fifth/ sixth gym. You can't even evolve them until after the E4 is beaten, yet Petty seems to have made him a really key point in the plot...

SUGauthor, September 7th, 2013, 3:48 pm     Reply

@SilverKey: We're talking about a trainer who used Butterfree on the elite 4, Weston is probably staying for a while.

Rainbowleaf, September 7th, 2013, 7:41 pm     Reply

When I saw Athena was a Feraligatr, I was like: 0_0 that was fast... I was gonna do a HG run too, I just need to find my DS and someone to draw people (I suck at that) and then I can actually do something. IDEA: YOU WILL HELP.

thatoneguy (Guest), September 10th, 2013, 12:34 am     Reply

I read this on my tablet and I made a shortcut from here to the home screen because I love this series

Mango Dolphin (Guest), September 12th, 2013, 5:28 pm     Reply

That's it.
I'm tired of waiting. This needs to happen now.
I'm going to make my own Nuzlocke. Thanks to you, Petty, I've decided to do it! I've just gotta say thank you. You're a magnificent artist, and you kept your word. I'm going to try my best! There's no stopping!

...Oh yeah, good luck on the apartment hunting, hope everything goes well~!

Rift (Guest), September 12th, 2013, 6:57 pm     Reply

@Mango Dolphin: Will you do a story or comic of your run, or will you just play through and see how it goes? If you end up posting it somewhere, I'd certainly read it :)

SoraIndigo, September 15th, 2013, 1:56 am     Reply

Rage face
is it just me or does broseth right before he evolves to golem has that rage face that people usually says what.
also i wonder if she will get a shiny stone from a bug catching contest

Mango Dolphin (Guest), September 19th, 2013, 9:27 pm     Reply

@Rift: Probably a comic of the run. I'm extremely lazy + school, so you probably shouldn't expect it soon... And I thought maybe I'd post it here in smackjeeves because it seems like a pretty good place to host a comic series.

Oh yeah, I forgot. It's gonna be Sacred Gold, which is a hack of Heartgold. Just thought it'd be more exciting since my brother has Soul Silver and all.

@SoraIndigo: Hopefully she will. Togekiss is awesome.

Xenos (Guest), September 25th, 2013, 8:52 am     Reply

@Guest: Well... Flat boobs are a problem.

Negaman1020 (Guest), October 5th, 2013, 2:58 pm     Reply

Broseph looks like such a BAMF. dem glasses, brah

Megatyrant (Guest), October 31st, 2013, 4:00 pm     Reply

Well now, that was quite a few evolutions there. Good to see an update to the comic. :)

I have plans of trying a Nuzlocke of my own. Won't be able to make a comic or anything out of it, though. :P

Apparently Clueless (Guest), October 31st, 2013, 9:42 pm     Reply

You aren't dead, right?
So have you officially quit this series??? This was my favorite nuzlocke... 2 months ago...what happened :'o

Your mom, yo. (Guest), November 3rd, 2013, 6:19 pm     Reply


rainbowz (Guest), November 7th, 2013, 1:45 pm     Reply

Update plz? I just really love this comic :)

Scorpio750, December 1st, 2013, 6:18 am     Reply

@Kurona: you're also assuming they all survive... foolishly optimistic, young one fufufufufu

Scorpio750, December 1st, 2013, 6:20 am     Reply

YES. Umbreon is my FAVORITE. my Umbreon (Lumen) in my HG Nuzlocke is my pride and joy. Also good because they are very defensive pokemon.

LKWayvern, April 24th, 2015, 7:04 pm     Reply

"Quick, Athena! Fastball special!"
...Could I help it? Yeah. Would life be anywhere near as fun? Nope! X3

Charlotte057, February 20th, 2016, 9:18 pm     Reply

You're gonna have to toss me. >:C

ThatPoemGuy, August 30th, 2017, 3:19 am     Reply

I get that Umbreon has its place in a Nuzlocke, but personally, I adore Espeon. Love my Glass Cannon.
Also, can't believe no-one has said this:
~And the man in the back said 'Everyone attack!' and it turned into a ballroom blitz!~
~And the girl in the corner said 'Boy I wanna warn ya, it'll turn into a ballroom blitz!'~

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